December 05, 2003

Snowing...

The rooftops
cliche

covered in white
the night seems to creep closer

and all these lines have been written before

Sylvia Plath
and her strange name
batting left innings in my head

dreaded things
clawing notes of suicide
and I am not even brave enough to answer

whisper bad echoes
from Gothika

bad film
bad writing

pretty black girl underwater
and all my exes are beautiful today

you exquisite
as always

me trapped in Brooklyn

in an apartment
bigger than I need it
smaller than it could be

I could be anywhere
and it wouldn't matter

where are you
my body drums the question
day after day

cold
tits
witches
and romance

I love you
world

would give anything to be able to leave you
and come back still

coming back is always
sweet
like thick milk
in Westmoreland

canned
tinned we are wont to say in the Caribbean

love and a bottle
and me
finally drinking wine

I feel like a writer now
know what it feels like
with more than the heat of passion in my blood

you have always been fire
in my thin veins of truth

I have always wanted to own all of you
you
were too big to be held by my small arms

babies and what might become child

not mine
I am sure it is not mine

might never be mine
with the tiny hands of Sylvia and her pen
pinning me to questions
I answered long ago

writers
spinning tales of how they remember things to be
how they wished things were
before the loss

before the breaking of small things
gone whole

missing you is a constant
dumb plug
of water against drain

and rain is just snow
in a warmer place

and I am not writing enough

meetings about CDs
and production
and the lack of money's to do things right

the bell Jar calls

and I am it's bitch
watch me run...

Staceyann

Posted by staceyann at December 5, 2003 07:52 PM
Comments

i am sitting alone in my room
no snow
but I understand Sylvia.

Thank you.

Posted by: Leigh at December 6, 2003 01:01 AM

Beautiful words Ms. Chin. I was given the opportunity to see you during the Women In the Life Event in Washington, DC. You and Doria rocked. But you alone, were truly speechless. Keep on giving it to them.


*Virginia is cold, but without you - the flesh becomes frost bitten*

Posted by: Identity at December 6, 2003 01:40 AM

I can't tell you how many times I have secretly visited your soul.
We are
"right here"
">>> The words you spill out.. express my heart in so many ways. Make my mind process at so many levels.
Thank you for your fragments.
Your Questions.
Your random thoughts.
Your weak and strong.
Your being.
Don't ever think you aren't loved- even if you can't feel it physically.
You are prayed for and thought of Pretty Miss.
Be blessed-
Monnie

Posted by: Monnie at December 7, 2003 01:58 AM

No one understands Sylvia Plath. That's a myth and she has become the cliche for the sensative psycho's downward spiral into depression and self-pity. If they had invented Prozac in her day, she'd have been a comma. But she does inspire you to write the kind of stuff that rings so true after the third or fourth glass of wine and Bill Wither's "Ain't No Sunshine When She's Gone." That's a lethal combination: Sylvia Plath, Bill Withers and bottle. Thanks for the am entertainment.

Posted by: Dawn at December 11, 2003 06:02 AM